○ My gift, as a secret santa, for for the group #kawaiiheaven
○ I'm really really sorry you didn't receive your gift on Christmass.. But I do hope you like it, I worked really hard (:
○ Okay, I know the perspective is strange, and it's full of mistakes, but it's my first time doing something like this, and I gave my best.. You can give me a constructive critique if you want, I want to improve :3
First of all, the stars are just silly, but I'm going to try to select what I, personally, think is best suited for your piece here today. (:
The foreshortening you have done on this piece is amazing. The details, to the coloring and accents, to the cute little design around of her! It's all well balanced, and just super adorable!
If I had to change one thing? It would be her nose shifting over the tiniest bit! Maybe make the glasses look like their behind of the braids a bit better? Hm hm hm. And maybe make her skirt a different color, perhaps? I get the theme of the yellows, the cool blues, and the pink to contrast; but maybe something that's different from her hair. But at this point, it feels like a personal preference.
Oh my cookielein this looks awesome, even the perspective looks pretty much correct in my eyes :3 Your coloring style got also really cool, I espacially love the colors you used for the hair x3 You have improved so much in the last year
The foreshortening you have done on this piece is amazing. The details, to the coloring and accents, to the cute little design around of her! It's all well balanced, and just super adorable!
If I had to change one thing? It would be her nose shifting over the tiniest bit! Maybe make the glasses look like their behind of the braids a bit better? Hm hm hm. And maybe make her skirt a different color, perhaps? I get the theme of the yellows, the cool blues, and the pink to contrast; but maybe something that's different from her hair. But at this point, it feels like a personal preference.
It looks fine, to be honest! <3
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